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Alright....

It was okay, but the great jokes were ruined by the horrid timing, and the overall bad voice-overers. My advice to you is that you tell your voice-actors to get a better microphone. It goes a long way.

Scythemantis responds:

I did every voice myself when I was just learning flash and used the microphone on a set of headphones. Ugh :(

I'm eventually going to re-dub this entire cartoon, when I'm less busy working on whole new ones.

Hrrrmmm...

The script isn't the best... and it's getting worse with each episode. I really think you should get someone else to write the script, and also, the delivery of the jokes is getting wrecked.

The delivery of the jokes is getting wrecked because:

A) You're putting the voice clips too far apart. The jokes aren't as snappy as they're supposed to be. The pacing's been messed up.

B) Throwback's voice-actor sucks. He's sooo boring and doesn't read the jokes very well. In fact he doesn't voice act very well.

David-Gornoski responds:

Can I remind you that this is tongue-in-cheek humor. The genre of the show is adventure first...Comedic bits are sprinkled on.
But like I said, the show is a tongue-in-cheek poke at Saturday morning cartoons...that means I AIM to replicate the cheesiness and even appearances of "bad acting" that was so prevalent in many of the 80s and 90s morning cartoons.

GREAT!

I thought the episode was brilliant, but the ending was a bit too abrupt, and the voice actor for Throwback sounded like an amateur. He sounded like he was reading it straight with little to no comedy in his voice and the encyclopedia bird's voice was so monotonous I wanted it to stop; it went on too long.

No, don't remake it.

That was really funny... not laugh out loud funny, but chuckle and "wow he's good" funny.

Bravo.

WHAT THE HELL!

That was the oddest most disturbing thing I've ever seen.

I like it.

It's not as bad as Jay says...

I think it was brilliant. No matter what Jay said. I think the delivery was great and the randomness was there... it wasn't as random as your previous work, but you don't have to be too random to be funny.

Wow.

I thought that to make a good comedy series, you needed really good graphics, but you don't. I see with your Flashes, while they haven't got the best of the Flash quality, they don't have the noobish slip-ups that others make, like:

-When the flash plays, you can still see some bare stage, even while a background is up.

-They use the pencil tool, and it has odd dots and slip-ups in odd places.

Your Flash cartoon had none of that, so while the quality of the graphics weren't brilliant, I got the feeling that you're able to draw properly.

Kudos, mate. I 5'ed it because the storyline and the jokes kicked arse.

Those graphics were superb.

I've never seen anything like the rang of colours you showed there. I think you've just brought up the standard on Newgrounds. If I had a hat, I'd take it off and lay it at your feet.

But I don't. So I just comment.

JazLyte responds:

Haha thxies :)

Good! Good...

I think you've doen well with this... but what you need to work on is the timing.

The gap between each punchline and each sentence makes it pretty slow paced... I almost lost patience... and it isn't helped by the mediocre mic quality. There were no ruffles on the mic, but it had a bit of feedback in the background which you don't really notice until Joga stops talking.

As well as that... possibly work on the visuals... I know they'll get better as you get better at Flash... and at the moment they're not bad.... but keep in mind that sometimes a little fbf adds to the quality.

A-Weebl's Stuff.... PRODUCTION

That's a mighty catchy jingle.

And also....

REP THE BRITS!

Thanks weebl, for yet another great flash.

Kepp it up.

Um... well what d'you want me to say?

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